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Snowman Writing by Lucas

First I get snow out side on the grawnd . Next I roll two balls of snow. After that I stack the to balls of snow on top of ech uthr. Then I add two coal eyes and a cairte nose. Also I get a hat scarf and coal for the mouth. Last I have a snow man.

Comments

  1. 1
    Mrs. McClure says:

    Lucas – You did a great job using transition words. You had neat handwriting. Next time try to use commas when you have many items in your sentence! Way to go!

  2. 2

    Lucas – You did good transition words. Way to go!

  3. 3

    Lucas, you did a good job labeling your snowman. Next time, be sure to check your spelling. good job!

  4. 4

    next yoos commas with your handwriting. you did a good job lucas.

  5. 5

    Lucas, you did great making capital letters. Next time, work on putting in commas.

  6. 6

    you did a good job on your handwriting lucas.

  7. 7
    Mary Elizabeth says:

    Lucas you did a good gob on your hand writing but you need to check your spelling words like to (two).

  8. 8

    you did very good lucas

  9. 9

    lucas you did a grate job on your handwriting. next time check for spelling words.

  10. 10

    lucas you do a good job using transition words.

  11. 11

    lucas you did a good job on transition words.

  12. 12

    lucas I like how neat yor handwriting is. next time you can use comas.

  13. 13

    you did good labls.

  14. 14

    Thank you everyone.

  15. 15

    Lucas was very excited about this-it looks great! Everyone’s comments were very helpful, too. 🙂

  16. 16

    lucas i like how neat your hANDWRITING IS. NEXT TIME YOU CAN USE COMMAS.

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